Sunday, November 29, 2009
Prem je aamay chhare na.......
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Esob porei kaanna hashi roj
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Shudhu taari kothar, taari chhobir khoj.
Prem aami chherechi kobei
Kintu prem je aamay chhare na
Se to barte thake moner bhitor
Amar ekta kothao shune na
Bidrohi prem je aamar
Riti niti manei na
Shey beporowa, bodmejaji
Obujh kichui bujhe na.
Aajo taake shopne dekhe
Hotath uthi kepe
Taar kothai bhabte thaki
Raatro jege jege.
Jemon poraay amaar boshto na mon
Ami aaj office-e aanmona
Amar take niyei lekhalekhi
Aajgobi sob kolpona.
Etto bochhor, shey etto dure
Tobu takei dekhi ami
Haay korto jodi sheo omon
Amar moton paglami
Ekhon notun raasta, notun saathi
Kintu mon to notun noy
Moner bhitor prem purono
Tai to koshto hoy
Sobai bole “Haay kolonko…
Morbi je ei Neshay”
Ami kolonkito hotei chai
Priyor bhalobaashay.
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14 comments:
Good to see you back...and with a poem about rebellious love to boot.
Seems too heartfelt to be a piece of imagination.
Kolongkito rokto bole
aamar prem tor chobole
tobe keno aakash bhange
bristir bikrito probole?
Shokto mati
aami ningriye hati
roktakto jebon kuriye
tobe keno path haatar vaan kore
jebon jai furiye? .... keep walking!!!
BTW... its good to see u back... :)
Ya..though I always tell that poets are licenced to lie...But Yes I believe that even these lies speak of truth hidden somewhere deep within!
Rebellious love...ya...It indeed is difficult to teach moral science to love :)
o nice lines...kaar likha?tomar?sottyi...poth hathar bhan korte korte jibon ta furiya jaay...
lovely..... your deep seeded emotions have once again given birth to another beautiful gem....
love has to be rebellious.... or else it was not love!!!!!
Your poem spoke so much about the unspoken.... loved it..
welcome back!!!
Poignant.
Hope you are doing good.
Chhutchis tui micche,
Maya mrigyer peeche!
Monon tore koy, e poth jatonamoy. Arre!! se tor pawar noy.
Keno morichikay tobe nirer asha?
A bhai kemon valobasha?
Baba Techie hoeo eto bangla kabita.... bhaba jai na....
kichu suggestion ki dite pari?
jani na jotharto kina ... tao mone holo deoa uchit...
jemon..
"Esob porei kaana hashi roj"
^
mone hoi word ta "kanna"
"Shey beprowa, bodmejaji"
^
mone hoi word ta "beporowa"
good work.. keep it up... arekta suggestion prem e batha pete nei... biroho thakei seijonnoi prem o ache.. biroho na thakle prem eto bhalo bodh hoi hoto na... end of the day ekta kothai bolte chai "Har ke jitne walo ko Bazigaar kahte hai"..... ;-)
mail koro bhalo lagle...
@ Piku
Welcum to my blog! Dhonnobad..for your kind corrections...Typos.
techie...ei upadhi ta kokhon je chharbe aamay...
bTW....do we know each other? Tomar profile ta inaccessible for me.
Ami basically kono blog r sathe connected noi.. but plan korchi blog lekhar.... sei jonnoi search korchilam and er or blog e uki jhuki marchilam...
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amar life e amar ja bhalo lage ami tai kori... abossoi bhul korle seta sudhreo ni :-) tai kaoke chini ki na chini seta dekhi na kintu comment die di... ;-) na chinle bandhuttyo hoe jabe... amar prochur bandhu ei bhabei hoe geche...
techie upadhay charar kotha keno?
Techie hoar positive jinis gulo bodhoi tumi jano na... as a techie we miss lot of things from our real life but at the same time we ensure that other people will not miss the same... You can ask how? e.g amader jonnoi prithibite "e" kothatar eto gurrotto bereche and seijonnoi manush aro time pache tar life take enjoy korar.. actually we save others time by wasting our precious time..... :-)
ekta reply... :-)
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